
For this poster I decided to keep certain minimalistic aspects while adding accents such as graphic snowflakes to give it character. I created this so the graphic was to the point and offers and intriguing activity.

For this ad I changed it so that it had more aspects promoting my product rather than just the activity the product enhances. I added the logo at the bottom and have a continuation of the T in tips to bring the viewer across the the spread.

For this layout I also chose to keep this layout to the point by using a strong graphic due to little text. I evened out the columns on the bottom of the article. i used lines to bring the texts into the graphic.

For this ceramics layout I changed the color of the dates so they pop out more. I have a red back round here to mimic the original paper I printed it on.
On the wax ad. What do you want the reader to do once they have digested the info in the ad? Do they buy this online, in a store nearby, is the product tied to any national retailers? You need a call to action on the ad.
ReplyDeleteA few more snow flakes of varying size (on the bottom triangle - don't use them at 100% of the color screen them back a bit (70 - 80% tint).
The article: - cut the copy a bit and increase your margins some. The text is very tight in the space remaining after you drop in the big image. Drop it off of the top edge more than the bottom and sides. Needs some breathing room.
Ceramics poster: Try the "Ceramics Class" text in white too. It might be too much though. Would like to see it.